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Most people in the world have to work to earn living. However, many people work only for the financial gain that it involves, and not for any other rewards that a job can offer. What do you think the main consideration when deciding what job to take should be?

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Whilst the majority of people compete to get proper
jobs
 that offer financial earnings for fulfilling their basic daily needs, there are some employees who seek and perform certain occupations for other
reason
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. Not only for
a
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 affordable amount of salaries the companies offer, but these people do that for acquiring invaluable job experiences
as well as
 for pride and satisfaction. On the one hand, it is commonly believed that getting salaries for
living
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a living
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 is the main reason people work for. Some workers who have family
responsibility
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responsibilities
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 devote their life to
get
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getting
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 regular
earning
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earnings
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 to
guanrantee
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guarantee
 their appropriate,
standar
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standard
living
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of living
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, including basic daily needs, transportation costs, and educational
cost
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costs
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 of their children (if any). Some
youngters
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youngsters
also
strugggle
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struggle
struggled
 to
hardly
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 work for having fun and go travelling in their spare time. For them, earning is a crucial
factors
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 to secure their living.
On the other hand
, some
professional
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professionals
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, especially millennials and juniors, take
jobs
 for life experience and for social status. Working in a certain company which has a
well
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good
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 reputation and offers job training is
best
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the best
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 option, allowing them to adapt and acquire invaluable rewards that are work cultures and professional experiences.
This
,
for
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in
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 some cases, guarantee them
to
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apply
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get promotion and higher rewarding
jobs
 in other companies.
Moreover
, becoming members of
such
 bonafide companies is a sort of social pride and personal achievement they satisfy most and they show it among their relatives and social circles. In conclusion,
although
 earning
renumerations
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remunerations
remuneration
 to become financially survive is common consideration to
take
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jobs
, some millennials and junior professionals prefer to seek
for
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apply
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job experience and culture
as well as
 social prestige and individual achievement.
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