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Describe a difficult work or school situation how you overcame it. What happened? how did it end up?

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It was the first volunteer I participated in, it was a note-taking volunteer in which volunteers told people in need the content of classes.
However
, it is difficult for me to tell them in class because I could not write the content by following the professor's talking.
Therefore
, I practised writing and summarization for people who have difficulties. I
finally
 told them
the
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 class.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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