Some people think that young children should be allowed to do paid work, while others think that this should be illegal. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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young age that working paid jobs is either legal or illegal.Some people have in mind that a proper activity for children excludes work with real paid money.

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concept of thinking is shifting through the period of time and age.

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the one hand, giving the

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to work and make real money for people at an early age is not as bad as it might seem. The environmental pressure inside educational platforms

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different compared to the

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situation that we have been living in. So,

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providing permission for the

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to experience the load would change how they will think and act

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an issue and be much more prepared

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adulting.

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, being young is a gift of a lifetime that you can not ever rewind when you are

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.

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have plenty of time to learn and upgrade their soft skills and hard skills. The period of time as a young person is often used to have fun and not think what adults would think on

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daily basis. That's why there are many arguments that state how young fellas should enjoy and live the moment. In my opinion, giving the young population a chance to feel and participate in making money is a lesson

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never taught in the school curriculum.

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, abusing the opportunity could damage their early way of thinking.

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, a lesson is a lesson, but in life, we have to adapt based on our capabilities. In conclusion, there are some good deeds

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providing a platform for young people to educate themselves in the field. But overusing the line of chance is not wise.

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of the real world that we are currently sleeping on top of it sooner is

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excellent way of learning.