The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart demonstrates the most ordinary positive and negative features on Bowen
Island
. This
investigation was taken by the travelers
.
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travellers
Overall
, the most common merit is that people
live on the island
when the disadvantage is the cost of living is too high to survive.
To begin
with the disadvantages, half of the people
think the price of groceries is too high to live in Bowen Island
while
25% of visitors consider entertainment is worse. In addition
, there are 15% and 10% of people
think the weather and the quality of food are a demerit in Bowen Island
.
On the other hand
, 42% of tourists believe the people
who live on the island
are an advantage, whereas
35% of people
believe the landscape is better than expected. 12% of people
think culture is the most important thing to experience. However
, there are only 11% of tourists feel accommodation is good enough.Submitted by blair.chang975640 on
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