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The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, over a two-week period in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, over a two-week period in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graphs compare the budget of airline
ticket
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tickets
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which
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beginning
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began
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 in
Sydney
 to Melbourne and
turning
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turned
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 back during the period of 2 weeks in 2013 .
Overall
,
it is clear that
 commercial flights from
Sydney
 to Melbourne in two weeks had
a
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apply
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quite similar
tendencies
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tendency
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, exceptional
Monday’s
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Monday
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price
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prices
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. Meanwhile , these from Melbourne with the destination
Sydney
 saw more changes which happened on 3 types of day namely Monday , Friday and Saturday
Firstly
 ,
viewer
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the viewer
a viewer
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 can see easily that in the first chart , the fee for flight in
first
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the first
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week
 remain unchanged from Tuesday to the
last
 day of
week
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the week
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 and
this
 trend was as same as
week
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in week
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 2 .
However
 , there was only one transformation . The price of tickets for
week
 1 stood at 80$
while
 in the next
week
 , the passenger witnessed
the
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 dramatic decline of 30$ and became the third highest and more than Tues , Wed
as well as
 Thurs .
In
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 the other hand , the journey came back to
Sydney
 experienced more alters but those
was
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decrease
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decreased
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 trends in the second
week
 . Monday and Friday
was
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were
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 days when fee dropped remarkably by 20$ .
Lastly
 , Saturday’s price went down fewer
10
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than 10
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% , which was the second highest of 2nd
week
 .
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sydney, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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