The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.

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The process illustrates the modification of rainwater to drinking

water

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in Australia.It has four steps to alter fresh

water

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Initially

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, the raindrops collected from all rooftops in Australian towns and went through the pipe to underdrain storage after that

water

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moved to the filter .In the filter strains the dust and others next filtered

water

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stored in the storage tank .

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, the stored

water

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send to the

water

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treatment during that process some chemicals are poured into the

water

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destroying

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destroy

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harmful bacteria.Once the treatment is completed the

water

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stored

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is stored

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in the storage area

which

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apply

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is used to supply

water

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through pipes in

overall

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Australia.

To sum up

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this

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method is used to change drinking

water

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in Australia.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

119 words

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