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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A colleague lent you a book that helped you to prepare for a presentation at work. Write an email to your colleague thanking him/her. In the email, thank your colleague for lending you the book explain how the book helped you tell him/her how the presentation went Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Marek, At the
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 I am really grateful to you for
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 book you lent me. It helped me a lot
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in my presentation at work. As you know, my company increase so fast, I suppose that presentation went very well and it would
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 me to promotion. I really want it, I am working so hard now. The book helps me in part with new electrical cars, our engineers trying to prepare a new prototype electric car, but I can not tell you more it is our secret in
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 company. In the next week, I am going to our hometown to visit my family. Have you got any plans yet ? I invite you to the greek restaurant to thank you
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. It would be nice if we can meet again, I really enjoy spending time with you. If you are free, just text message
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me I will take a reservation. Stay
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 Best regards, Patryk
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