The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the Human Resources
application
and recruitment process for a company.
Overall
there are 7 or 9 steps depending on whether you are invited for
interview
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or rejected after
assessment
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the assessment
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is completed. After the interviews and assessment
process
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only
successful
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applicant
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will be offered the job. Applicants and applications which are rejected will get an email about the condition. First of all, candidates have to check a list of requirements which are drawn up.
Then
for their interest job listing is placed online. The
application
forms must be downloaded before being completed and submitted. After all these steps, the
application
will be assessed at a certain time. If
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candidates
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application
is rejected, the related department will send an email about the rejection.
However
, if
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candidate
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application
is accepted
then
he/her will be invited for an interview. At the moment of the Interview, there are 2 main pathways waiting for them.Applicants who
are unsuccessfully completed
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interviews and rejected will receive an email about the current situation.
On the other hand
, only
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applicant was selected between runner-up and winner.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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