The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the information about a tiny down in 2015 and for females more than 40% and a slight increase in 2015.
employment
rates
in the three countries such
as Camada,South Korea and Sweden in 2005 and 2015.Overall
, gradually increase the count of worked males in 2005 and female's employability rate was less compared to men.
Initially
, Canadian people and South Koreans
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Korean
employment
rates
slightly increased from 2015 distinguish between 2005 but in Sweden male employability decreased in 2015 and females rates
little high.More than 60 percent
of males work in Canada but it has a little high in 2015 ,which is 70 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
Additionally
, In 2005 nearly 40% of employment
count for women but it is
led to more than 50% in 2015.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Secondly
, in South Korea
more than 70% Add a comma
,Korea
men
worked both years but there is not a big difference and for females Change preposition
of men
also
the same more than 30%.In ,Sweden 70% men
working rate in the chartChange preposition
of men
Add a missing verb
was
To sum up
, Employment
rates
in the three countries minimal
variations in both years and that graph little fluctuated.Add a missing verb
had minimal
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