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the threeb pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001

the threeb pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001
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These pie charts illustrate the changes that took place in 1981, 1991 and 2001 in a particular UK school in annual spending. The data shown is divided into 3 charts for each year.
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, it can clearly be seen that most of the annual spending was on the teachers’
salaries
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,
while
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 the least one was on
the
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insurance
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. First of all, teachers’
salaries
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 were at the top of the annual spending per year reaching 40%, 50% and 45%, respectively.
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 the total school spending in 1981, resources, furniture and equipment stood at the same percentage which is 15%.
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, the spending on
insurance
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 was the least one reaching 2%. In 1991 other workers’
salaries
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 were 22% which was higher than the percentage of resources by 2%. The spending on
insurance
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, furniture and equipment was
similar
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reaching 3% and 5%. Most of the total school spending in 2001 was on the teachers’
salaries
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 as it stood at 45%. By far, the money spent on resources was slightly under 10%, but the other workers’
salaries
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 were 15%. That was lower than the spending on furniture and equipment. For
insurance
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, it was still the lowest percentage over
this
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 year among the other spending
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, insurance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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