the threeb pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001
These pie charts illustrate the changes that took place in 1981, 1991 and 2001 in a particular UK school in annual spending. The data shown is divided into 3 charts for each year.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that most of the annual spending was on the teachers’ salaries
, while
the least one was on the
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insurance
.
First of all, teachers’ salaries
were at the top of the annual spending per year reaching 40%, 50% and 45%, respectively. According to
the total school spending in 1981, resources, furniture and equipment stood at the same percentage which is 15%. On the other hand
, the spending on insurance
was the least one reaching 2%. In 1991 other workers’ salaries
were 22% which was higher than the percentage of resources by 2%. The spending on insurance
, furniture and equipment was similar
reaching 3% and 5%.
Most of the total school spending in 2001 was on the teachers’ Change the adjective
similarly
salaries
as it stood at 45%. By far, the money spent on resources was slightly under 10%, but the other workers’ salaries
were 15%. That was lower than the spending on furniture and equipment. For insurance
, it was still the lowest percentage over this
year among the other spendingSubmitted by malak.ayman1 on
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