the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories

the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories
This
reports
derives
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from a bar chart which illustrates the total time of telephone calls in three different categories in the UK.
Overall
, The
usage
of the fixed line for local calls rose first five
year
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and slightly decreased in 21th-century. Meanwhile, for international and national calls numbers are continuously going up and for mobile calls after 21th-century
usage
of mobiles rapidly increased. Notably, between 1995 and 1998 local calls grew
nearly
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30 billion minutes doubled time
than
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national and international calls which
are
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slightly increased. Next with mobiles, more than doubled in that time but stands the least in the term of
usage
with nearly 10 minutes in 1998.
In addition
to that, By 1999 national and international calls were 50 minutes and slightly increased to 60 in 2002. There was a rapid increase in the
usage
of mobiles more than tripled
while
local calls
are
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decreased slowly over years.
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