You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am sorry that I will not be able to attend the

interview

on 13th February at 8AM. Actually, three months ago I

have

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apply

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booked an appointment with an

orthopedic

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orthopaedic

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doctor for my back posture, as he is the only specialized doctor in my city, going back to the queue and

wait

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for additional 4 months will not be good for my spine. I am really sorry for the inconvenience and apologise for the unavailability. I'm really interested to attend

this

interview

and available throughout the day after 9AM, is it possible if I can come for the

interview

anytime after that ?

Also

, can you please provide me

the

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duration of the

interview

and details regarding any additional test apart from the regular

interview

? Again, I'm really sorry for

this

situation and thank you for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Trilochan Singh

Submitted by prudhvi.pinninti18 on Tue Feb 14 2023

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