The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph gives
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ratio and
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depicts the future percentage of people living in six different countries namely,
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Asia
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,
africa
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, Europe,
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America
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and
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oceania
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in three different years (1950, 2007, 2050).
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, the highest percentage of
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population
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belongs to
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America
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(64%, 79%, 90%)
whereas
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Africa has the lowest percentage of
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population
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in 1950 and in 2007
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, the rate will increase to 62% in 2050 but it will still be less from the other six countries. It is clear from the data shown in the graph, the
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of Europe and
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America
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was above 40% in 1950 and raised to
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in 2007.In 2050,
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,it is expected that the
population
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of both
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nations will exceed 83% .The
population
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of
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America
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and
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oceania
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was below 65% in 1950.the rate raised to
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79% in
north
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America
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and 76% in
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oceania
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in the year 2007. The expected rate of
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oceania
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is less than
north
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America
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in 2050 (76% when compared
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to 90
%). To illustrate, the graph shows an increase in
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of
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population
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the population
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showing that
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population
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the population
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has increased over the years and it will keep on increasing till 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words america, oceania, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban areas
  • population density
  • economic development
  • historical urbanization
  • trends and outliers
  • urbanization levels
  • socio-economic implications
  • environmental impact
  • urban living
  • global trend
  • development strategies
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