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: Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people prefer that schools must reward
students
 who ace their academic results,
whereas
 others believe that it is vital to appreciate
students
 who show improvements. on
one
 hand, rewarding
students
 who are good at
academics
 can have a lot of positives.
for instance
, let's say a student was the topper of the class and he was appreciated with some gift on a stage in front of all his classmates, parents and teachers. He will feel proud and honoured to get the reward. It
is definitely be
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 a strong motivation thing to him and he tries to maintain the same intent for upcoming tests.
Moreover
, it inspires his classmates to work towards increasing their
scores
 in
academics
. on another hand, rewarding
students
 who show improvements in
the
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academics
 is equally important because it encourages many people who are trying hard to get better
scores
 than previous
scores
. It is not possible for each and every student to become the best at
academics
 but they are trying their best to improve their
scores
. so If the school recognise their hard work and rewards some gift. It is going to encourage them and inspire a lot of
students
 who are working hard to improve their
scores
. In my opinion, schools should reward both academic toppers and who are trying hard to improve their
scores
. schools come up with two different types of rewards
one
 for academic
acers
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acres
 and
one
 for improved
scores
. ,
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 even
one
 student
get
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gets
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 motivated by providing rewards to improve
score
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their score
his score
her score
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 which is a positive thing.
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