Some people think that best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Other however believe that there are other alternatives ways of reducing crime. Discuss your opinion?

Many

people

argue that we should extend the

time

in jail

of

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prisoners to deteriorate the

crime

rate.

However

,

peacemarkers

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peacemakers

advise there are still more positive solutions to diminish the number of crimes. The essay below will debate

on

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both. Expanding the

confine

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time

of prisoners in jail is a significant way to prevent

people

to commit a

crime

. They have a tendency to think twice before

act

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illegal

behaviors

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behaviours

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. Taking Singapore as an example,

this

country

impose

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extreme

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strict law about

cocains

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cocaine

, compared to other countries. The punishment

of

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illegal drug

transportations

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in Singapore is three

time

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times

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higher than

other

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in other

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countries, it

also

means the

time

of

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prisioners

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prisoners

are

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longer.

Therefore

, they will not commit a

crime

in Singapore and the

crime

rate will reduce.

However

, there are other solutions to drop the percentage of

crime

. One of the

way

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is government should enhance the quality of citizen's life. The better life standard

people

have

,

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the number of

crime

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crimes

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decreases. To do that,

economy

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the economy

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is the primary key to completely

change

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the

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citizen

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citizens

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behaviours because I believe

the

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crime

cause

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from

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the

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impoverishment, so

people

will not commit some

crime

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crimes

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involved

to

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thief or

burlary

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burglary

bursary

.

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, there was

an

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social experiment in Dubai where

one third

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one-third

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of citizens are employers. The video host pretended to drop his wallet on the street and a hidden camera was set up to record pedestrians whether they give back

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the wallet

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wallet

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to the host.

As a result

, 8 out of 10

people

returned. I believe the experience can show up the minority of

crime

in Dubai which is a prosperous country. In summary, I agree not only extending the jail

time

of

prisioners

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prisoners

is

a

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effective way to reduce

crime

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the crime

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rate but

also

boosting

up

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the economy of

country

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the country

a country

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is a remarkable solution. In my opinion,

government

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the government

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can apply both solutions to achieve the best result.