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In many major cities around the globe the amount of traffic is growing. What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

#cities #globe #amount #traffic
Nowadays, crowded cars have been
increaseing
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increasing
 around the globe. Especially, in
big
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city
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. which contain many
people
.
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, more noise during driving on the way. Analysing the reasons of causes more traffic
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, and the solution that can we do for it. I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraph.
Firstly
, the most cause
overcrowded
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trafic
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traffic
, In my opinion, is during
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period
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 of rush,
for example
,
people
 want to
going
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 to their work, most of them at the same time which
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usualy
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usually
 in the early morning,
therefore
, more
people
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same
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 minute.
Moreover
, In some country, a person
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private
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 car,
for instance
,
Saudi
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 Arabia, the majority of
people
 have their own car, they do not have public transport,
hence
,
this
 may cause more
congested
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.
Secondaly
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Secondly
, the reasonable solution for congestion, is
divide
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 the time of work.
especilly
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especially
, the government
istitute
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institute
instituted
.
such
 as some worker start their
tsaks
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tasks
 at 7o’clock morning and
other
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 8 o’clock.
as a result
 the
congested
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wil
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will
 be reduced. In conclusion. dividing time for workers are significant to reduce traffic congestion. particularly during
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period
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 of rush.
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