Working abroad can help employees earn a great deal of money and gain more benifits however, some people think this trend has many nagative impacts. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working abroad.
Nowadays,
people
were leaving mother
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their mother
country
and moving to other continents for better opportunities but most of
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apply
people
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the people
assuming
that it would bring Wrong verb form
assume
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an effect
effect
on Correct your spelling
affect
life style
. As per Correct your spelling
lifestyle
current
scenario, having international experience will support carrier Add an article
the current
build up
. Despite, get separate from home town. Add a hyphen
build-up
In the
upcoming paragraphs has given Change preposition
The
advantage
and disadvantages of being separate from Correct article usage
the advantage
own
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their own
country
.
From 2015 onwards, majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
Indian
population Add an article
the Indian
were
finding a way to go abroad for settlement in life at Correct subject-verb agreement
was
early
stage. Add an article
an early
The
Countries like Europe, Correct article usage
apply
America
were accepting Correct word choice
and America
the
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apply
people
from other nationalities for development
of their own continent by paying Correct article usage
the development
excess
of Add an article
an excess
amont
as Correct your spelling
amount
salary
. Correct article usage
a salary
Government
as well as
private companies providing
a chance to Wrong verb form
provide
exposing
their talents and Wrong verb form
expose
making
them Wrong verb form
make
to
stay by giving benefits. Once they get citizenship Change the verb form
apply
of
respective place, Change preposition
in
government
provide more benefits like free education for children, health insurance so on. Hence
, moving to different
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a different
location
would bring more Fix the agreement mistake
locations
advantage
. Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
Thus
, it is great
opportunity to gain savings and development in Add an article
a great
carrier
.
As Add an article
a carrier
the carrier
people
start to move other countries would impact development
of Add an article
the development
mother land
. In fact, Correct your spelling
motherland
economic
crisis starts Add an article
the economic
by
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with
reduction
in business. If customer Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
not
available Add a missing verb
are not
then
products get stocked for many years, will face excess
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an excess
of
loss for merchants and brings poverty Change preposition
apply
in
their family. Change preposition
to
Along with
that, every parents
has to wait many years to see their children. It will bring emotional experience Change to a singular noun
parent
by
Change preposition
to
guardian
. When Add an article
a guardian
the guardian
people
were not there to look after they get settled in old age home, hence
currently percentage
of those secured home Add an article
the percentage
were
increasing each day. If Change the verb form
was
government
take proper
responsible Change the adjective
properly
on
citizens it will be Change preposition
for
great
Change the word
greatly
supportive
Replace the word
support
to
own nation. Change preposition
of to
Hence
, there are many negative impact
on Change to a plural noun
impacts
country
.
In conclusion, as Add an article
the country
people
starts
to Change the verb form
start
leaving
there Wrong verb form
leave
is
benefits for individuals but loss for Change the verb form
are
country
. Add an article
the country
Hence
, government
should to underaction as soon as earliest similar to other countries Add an article
the government
then
most of them to Replace the word
than
be settle
in their land.Change the verb form
settle
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...