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You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, • Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am Rustamova Laylo I used a removal
company
 to help me move my belongings.
However
, some of my things were damaged in the move.
For
this
 reason, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about my things which should repair. Now I am afraid that I have to ask you to change them with another one. Well,I heard about your removal
company
 from my older brother who advised me to choose
this
company
 because of its good services.
For
this
 reason, I would prefer to choose your
company
.
However
, during the move, some of my furniture
such
 as the TV and fridge is damaged. After coming to our new house, I wanted to relax.
For
this
 reason, I turned on the TV. But I found that the Tv was not working well
as well as
 other furniture like a fridge. I think the best solution for
this
 problem is to change them for new ones. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. Yours faithfully, Rustamova Laylo Laylo Rustamova
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