The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans display the current situation of
an
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airport and upgrades that will take place in the next year.
Overall
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, more facilities will be added both before and after security and passport controls, café and check-in will be moved and the number of gates will increase. As of now, the arrivals
hall
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is empty,
this
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is about to change after the airport undergoes
the
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redevelopment. The café,
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that
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which
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is currently at the departures
hall
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, will move here and an ATM machine will be
instaled
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installed
right next to it.
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, the arrivals
hall
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will expand and
this
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place will be used by a car hire service. In the departures
hall
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, the check-in will be moved to the opposite position same
for
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café
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the café
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, which will be in the left-down corner. Crucially, after the reconstruction,
bag-drop
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will
be build
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at a place where check-in used to be.
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, after passing security controls, passengers will be able to make some
shoping
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shopping
in
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newly opened boutiques. The
gates
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area
that is
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used by both types of passengers (arriving and leaving) will grow in size from 5
gate
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to 18. To make moving around the area more
conviniet
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convenient
for
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the passenger
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passenger
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passengers
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in the next year a sky train will replace
walkway
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the walkway
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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