Some people say that governments need to prioritize the treatment and management od diseases of the people in the community. Otherss say that it should pay attention to primary health care more. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

some populations who have a positive attitude toward the

governments

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government

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must increase the

quality

of hospitals and pay attention more to the

quality

of treatment

plan

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.

in contrast

,if

governments

protect society from

growing

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variety of diseases, they must support primary

health

care more than past. in

this

essay, I want to discuss both sides of viewpoints and give my perspective. on the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that

governments

must rise the

quality

of treatment and control illness. from

this

point of view, if the state increases the

quality

of hospitals or found a better way to solve illnesses, people are able to live better.

for example

, the development of drugs can solve most of the problems of patients.

furthermore

, from social

standpoints

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standpoint

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increasing

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the

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quality

health

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of health

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systems can grow people's satisfaction.

on the other hand

, many commentators justifiably argue that there are several merits if the

governments

pay attention more to primary

health

care. they believe the states must learn to children

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apply

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do every logic that have benefits for

body

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the body

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.

such

as, they must brush

teeth

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their teeth

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every

days

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day

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or they must do

excercis

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exercise

exercises

every day.

moreover

,

this

method to finds it easy to reduce most of the budget of

governments

. in conclusion, in my

personaly

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personal

opinion, if the

governments

want to

successful

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successfully

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to

impeove

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improve

their

health

problem, they must do both of

these theory

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this theory

these theories

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to be

win

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a win

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. so

the

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apply

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both view are

imortant

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important

to

help

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helping

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people that need to improve

quality

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their quality

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of

health

.