You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

#bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern #address #__________

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Dear Manager I regret to write

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letter as I have received an empty envelope letter without my credit

card

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despite the correct address having in bank records and I would like to bring to your attention the same as

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is the second time in a row. As you heard, I was terrified after I learnt that the missing

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and worried that somebody use that

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without my consent.

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, it does not have any protection or pin number too and not sure who has received it and I cannot even think of it in my dream and

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nightmare. I am little a bit anxious about where my

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is now and as I mentioned that if anything happened I would not be at all accountable.

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, if you would have informed me about my

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availability at the bank and I could have come to the branch and collected my

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safely.

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, please consider

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request and block my

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before someone use it. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter and I hope a new

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will be issued very soon . I would happy to come down and collect it by hand. Yours faithfully Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Wed Feb 15 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

206 words

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