You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

#bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern #address #__________

Dear Manager I regret to write

this

letter as I have received an empty envelope letter without my credit

card

despite the correct address having in bank records and I would like to bring to your attention the same as

this

is the second time in a row. As you heard, I was terrified after I learnt that the missing

card

and worried that somebody use that

card

without my consent.

In addition

, it does not have any protection or pin number too and not sure who has received it and I cannot even think of it in my dream and

this

nightmare. I am little a bit anxious about where my

card

is now and as I mentioned that if anything happened I would not be at all accountable.

Furthermore

, if you would have informed me about my

card

availability at the bank and I could have come to the branch and collected my

card

safely.

Hence

, please consider

this

request and block my

card

before someone use it. I look forward to hearing an update to

this

letter and I hope a new

card

will be issued very soon . I would happy to come down and collect it by hand. Yours faithfully Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Wed Feb 15 2023

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8 paragraphs

206 words

8.50

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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