the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbition, and planned future development of the site
The maps above comprised of contemporary state and future planning reflects the alternation in Norbiton industrial
area
which will be renovated into a residential area
, including replacement of factories and construction of living facilities which advent with an extension across the river.
Firstly
, for the most prominent change, two roads on the west and the north respectively to the big circle in the centre will be erected since factories will be torn down. Both of them connect to serval rows of housing while
the north one will cross the river surrounded by farmland which offers a pastoral life choice.
secondly
, another major development is in the south. The intersection of roads will be replaced by another circle and share a Medical centre that faced serval commercial shops with the existing circle to achieve convenience for daily living.
Finally
, the final transformation will affect the east. Leaving enough space for housing and community, factories alongside the road will disappear to support a school and a playground.
To sum up
, Norbition industrial area
tends to develop as a homogenous and harmonious living area
with convenient transport and sufficient resident facilities to meet the needs of medical, education and healthy.Submitted by arno2020 on
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