“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Childcare

is one of the major concerns of

working class

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families.

While

some

parents

believe that

childcare

nurseries do

better

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job in taking

care

preschool

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children

, others argue that

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parents

are the best caregivers for their

children

. In my opinion,

childcare

should be individualized

according to

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family structures and financial capacity. On the one hand, it is advocated that

childcare

centers

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can handle toddlers and young

children

in an effective manner.

Children

can be trained in social skills and can be prepared for school education because these centres

employs

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highly trained staff to teach these

children

.

Moreover

, young

children

have the opportunity to learn

along with

the same age group

children

in these

centers

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.

This

will introduce them to an effective socializing

skill

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at an early age.

In Addition

to that, admitting

children

to nursery schools take away the

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additional

stress

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the

parents

.

On the other hand

, there are many advantages when a child is taken

care

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grand

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parents

or family members. To explain

further

, grandparents truly love their grandchildren. When they

care

for their grandchildren, it will bring up emotional connections between them and makes their bond stronger. It

also

means that

children

will learn to value the importance of elders and respect them which is a crucial factor for family relationships. In my opinion,

childcare

in

this

modern world depends on many factors. Not all

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elderly

grandparent

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have the physical strength to take

care

young

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children

.

This

is because

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nursing a child can be physically too demanding.

In contrast

, not all

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working

parents

can financially afford

childcare

services.

Therefore

depending on the situation

parents

should decide on their

children

's caregivers.

To conclude

, though there

are

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varying

opinion

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opinions

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about providing

care

for

the

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preschool

children

in working families, I believe that

childcare

should be individualized

according to

the nature of a family.

Nonetheless

,

Children

should be taken

care

with

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love and respect so they can become valuable citizens in future.