The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetatian diet.

The graph illustrates the proportions of teenagers following a vegetable diet over 7 different periods of time from 1960 to 2020 in the United Kingdom.

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, the chart demonstrates great fluctuations over the years. Most of the youth followed the veg meal from 1960 to 1980.

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, after 1980 the percentage got dropped sharply till the time around 2000. From

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, it jumped marginally. From 1960, teenagers having vegetarian food got drastically increased from 0 to almost 15% till 1980 which was the peak. Followed by a sharp decline in 1990 with a percentage just above 5%. During the year around ,1992

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proportion got a slight rise and again declined to show some great fluctuations till the year 2000 when the young ones following the diet were approximately 5%. From the period after 2000, the percentage got increased to just above 10% in the year

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2012. From ,that it was almost steady will very little decline in the middle stage and again getting back to the same proportion in 2020.

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Feb 15, 2023

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The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetatian diet.

Some people regard that we ought to spend money and time protecting wild animals. Others argue that it is better only to spend it on human populations.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people now take extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.why do people risk their life's in this way,and do you think this is a good trend?

Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in one company for their entire career. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?