The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetatian diet.

The graph illustrates the proportions of teenagers following a vegetable diet over 7 different periods of time from 1960 to 2020 in the United Kingdom.

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, the chart demonstrates great fluctuations over the years. Most of the youth followed the veg meal from 1960 to 1980.

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, after 1980 the percentage got dropped sharply till the time around 2000. From

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, it jumped marginally. From 1960, teenagers having vegetarian food got drastically increased from 0 to almost 15% till 1980 which was the peak. Followed by a sharp decline in 1990 with a percentage just above 5%. During the year around ,1992

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proportion got a slight rise and again declined to show some great fluctuations till the year 2000 when the young ones following the diet were approximately 5%. From the period after 2000, the percentage got increased to just above 10% in the year

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2012. From ,that it was almost steady will very little decline in the middle stage and again getting back to the same proportion in 2020.

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Feb 15, 2023

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In today’s modern society, there have been several debates about whether schools should replace books by multimedia tools such as films, computers and games. In my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?