Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and plants and animals. Others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These present days, public debate has been going over

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the loss of particular

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of plants and

animals

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the main

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environmental

problem. Or there are

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other important

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environmental

problems. In my mind, I assert that the

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loss

of

animals

and

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species

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a real threats

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to

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our

world

for the following reasons. First and foremost, The decreasing rate in the plant's amount can affect The

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environmental

balance, which is very

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to

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.

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plants play a key role in the breathing process. Because they can help in

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decreasing

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Carbon dioxide Co2 percentage in the air;

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fresh and

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healthy

air.In South Africa ,

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is a huge

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of

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,

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decrease

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spread rate.

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that,

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animal

species

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a wild variety of

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benefits

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for our life. Obviously, all biological and

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researches are depend on the

animals

' examination ;

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, The Loss of particular

species

of animal con Cause a

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side

effect

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effects

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in our

world

. To illustrate, in 2019, when the

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pandemic

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Crisis Covid 19 start To spread around the

world

, all the

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trying to

to

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examine

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different

medications on

animals

to ensure

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safety

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.

on the other hand

, Admittedly, there are

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more and more important

envirometal

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environmental

problem

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problems

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;

such

as, increasing the ocean

flod

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flow

rate ,increasing the global warming temperature , Ozone problems and throwing a large amount of

non-recycable

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non-recyclable

products

on

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the sea and water.

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, the loss of particular different

species

of

animals

and plants possess a big threat to the

world

. In conclusion, having considered both views, I believe that

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live organisms play

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a significant

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role in our

world

;

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therefore

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, we need to work and protect them.