Due to an increased global demand on gas and oil undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to acesss more recourses

Due to

the

world

's increased demand for

Gas

and

oil

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it has become necessary to find new suppliers

elsewhere

and open new locations.

Although

there are several countries that already export

gas

and

oil

to different parts of the

world

, supplied resources are not enough to meet the needs of every country.

Firstly

, opening new locations will make the

world

less dependent on those suppliers.

For example

, during winter periods,

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use

of

oil

and

gas

increases.

Due to

supply shortages prices go up.If there are many suppliers to choose from prices of

oil

and cars will remain low in winter periods as well.

Secondly

discovering new exporters will benefit countries politically.

For instance

,the

world

currently heavily depends on Russia as it is a major

gas

supplier to many countries Russia's political decisions pressure the political views and decisions of many country leaders .

To conclude

, increased

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for

gas

and

oil

in recent years

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it necessary to look for new locations. In my ,opinion as the

world

constantly grows, in future years the trade

on

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oil

and

gas

is expected to grow even more.