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Many people/students today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people today prefer to live and work in a foreign
country
 after graduation from their domestic university. There are several factors influencing the decision making and
it
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 will be discussed in
this
 essay. On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why most students
keen
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 to live in another
country
.
Firstly
, fresh graduates who are looking forward to
live
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 in a non-native
country
, it is most probably because they have an over-protective family. By
habitating
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habituating
at
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in
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 a strange environment far from home, which means they will
no
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not
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 need to live under their
parents'
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parent's
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 roof and be able to get rid of their overwhelming family members.
Secondly
, it is true that if the students live in a rural place, it seems that the opportunity to get a higher salary with a fruitful job could be an impossible mission. It can
also
 be argued that living in another
country
 is a great challenge for freshmen.
On the other hand
, I believe that there are more benefits than setbacks
working
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 in a non-native
country
.
Firstly
,
while
 working there can be a tough journey,
newers
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newer
 are able to meet different people from all over the world.
This
 will enhance their
skills
 and ability in terms of interpersonal
skills
 and problem-solving
skills
.
In addition
, not only
does
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 foreigners can learn the local culture, and they can learn how to take good care of themselves in an unfamiliar environment. It is an essential
skills
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 to have
,
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 if you must live in another
country
 without any guardians. In conclusion, there are many reasons why people prefer to survive in another
country
, I believe the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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