The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who able to speak other languages in addition English, In 2000 and 2010.
The provided pie charts illustrate the percentages of
English speaking
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English-speaking
students
of an
university in the UK, who were capable of speaking foreign Change the article
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languages
in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the majority of students
in the university have spoken Spanish compared to other languages
,while
there was an increment in the proportions of students
who were able to speak other languages
.
In terms of Spanish speakers, the figure was at 30% in 2000 and rose to 35% in the next decade.Similarly
, charts shows
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growth in Remove the article
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students
who knew two languages
other than English, that was accounted for 10% in 2000 and increased to 15% in 2010. Furthermore
, undergraduates who spoke another language were at 15% in 2000 and it climbed to 20% after 10 years.
On the other hand
, there was a decrement in Add an article
a student
the student
student
who did not speak any other language, that was accounted for 20% in 2000 but reduced to 10% in 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Moreover
, people who spoke only French apart from English also
experienced a decline of 5% during the period. Finally
, the figures for German speakers were remained
the same at Change to the active voice
remained
have remained
the
percentage of 10% in both years.Correct article usage
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