many people like having a fixed daily routine, while other people enjoy a change in their life. mention both views and write your opinion.

In the contemporary
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there are two ways of doing
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one having a fixed
schedule
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of doing
things
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and the other having no definite routine in
life
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. In
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we shall look
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both
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sides and analyse why having a day to day planning is
important
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more important
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than not having any plan. To embark upon
people
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who follow a fixed plan daily feel that they need to have certain
planing
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planning
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and organized way of doing
things
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.
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set of humans will assign
certain
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a certain
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time
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for personal activities and for
work related
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activities and try to
acheive
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achieve
work
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life
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balance. By having a
schedule
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this
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type of
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people
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are
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great at
time
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management
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also
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and also
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will be able to put much more focus on
things
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that they have to do.
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, having a daily
schedule
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helps them remember what they have to do on
day-to-day
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basis and not
to
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miss any
activity
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.
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,
people
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who
doesn't
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have fixed planning in their daily routine feel that a fixed routine makes their
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mechanical and not
intresting
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interesting
anymore.
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set of
people
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would do
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a thing
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thing
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things
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at random in no fixed order and enjoy having spare
time
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whenever possible.
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for
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type of human
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beings
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it is difficult to put focus on any one thing as their interest may
loose
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lose
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once they started an
activity
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and
many
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may
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not put focus on one
activity
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for
long
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time
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.
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by not having planning in their
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life
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they may forget
doing
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certian
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certain
activity
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that is
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important to do. In
conclusion
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we have seen how having a
schedule
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on
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day-to-day activities helps in having
more
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a more
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balanced and much more focused
life
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than not having a fixed routine

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