The chart above shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The given graph illustrates the various volume of post-school qualifications in Australia and the
percentage
of males and females
who held them in 1999.
It is clear from the graph that the highest qualification
for men was the skilled vocational diploma
with 90 percent
and as opposed to it Change the spelling
per cent
females
of the same course were found to be with least percentage
is 10. The undergraduate diploma
was the second highest qualification
which was found with females
that is
70 percent
followed by men at 35 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.
The Change the spelling
per cent
percentage
of postgraduate diplomas and master's degrees was found to be almost similar for females
that are 30 and 40 respectively. Males for this
both courses were also
with the same difference of 10 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
While
bachelor's degree was at the average percentage
for both males and females
that is
45 and 50 percent
respectively.
overview, it has been clearly seen that the highest Change the spelling
per cent
qualification
for men is with
a skilled vocational Change preposition
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diploma
, and the highest qualification
for women was with an undergraduate diploma
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