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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
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The table compares the number of inhabitants in Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy and the Republic of Korea in 2003 and their predicted numbers in 2025 and 2050.
It is clear that
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Indonesia
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 had by far the largest
population
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 in 2013 and the same ranking position could be seen in 2050. The figure for the
population
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 of Argentina is the smallest in 2013.
However
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,
according to
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 projections, in 2050
this
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 position could be taken by Italy. In 2003 there were 238
million
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 people living in
Indonesia
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. With a growth rate of over 30
million
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 every 20 years,
Indonesia
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 could remain at the top of these four countries in terms of
population
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.
By contrast
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, Argentina, which had only 34
million
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 people in 2013, could see its
population
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 increase by a total of about 30
million
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 over the next 40 years or so. The Italian
population
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,
on the other hand
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, is likely to decrease, from 54
million
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 in 2013 to 45
million
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 in 2050, meaning that there could be fewer people living in Italy in 2050 than in any of the mentioned countries. The
population
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 figures for the Republic of Korea will stay relatively stable, seeing only a small increase of around 4
million
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 during the period of 2013 to 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, population, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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