We live in a world of technology these days .while the Internet brings with it clear advantages, problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages to what extend do you agree.

In recent years technology has become an important part of our everyday life.

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,

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also

acquitted problems with control of our security and privacy of our personal information, which

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outweighs

the advantages

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technological advancements .

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has impacted positively on lives of

people

of different

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and

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occupations

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and I believe that the advantages of

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are greater than

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the disadvantages

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.

Firstly

, communication has become faster and more accessible. Most workers these days use

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and

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to carry out their everyday work.

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includes sending emails, attending group meetings, zoom calls,

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and trainings

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.

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made it possible to do mentioned above from personal phones,

laptops

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and laptops

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without living rooms and even homes.

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made education accessible

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everyone. Students no longer have to rely on limited courses available at their local universities and colleges.

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, anyone who lives in Ireland can study and graduate from

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university located anywhere in the world.Another

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of the

Internet

is that it helped

people

to save time.

For instance

,

people

who work long hours, no longer need to go to shops and buy food or clothes. They can order everything online.

Although

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has improved

people

's quality of life ,it has some drawbacks too.It has affected

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the privacy

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of

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personal lives, many

internet

applications request

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access to our gadget cameras and microphones before we are able to use them.It has become difficult for parents to control their children's use of different websites.In order to register on certain websites or to shop online, we need to provide personal and bank details, our address and which makes our personal

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information

informatin

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information accessible

ccessible

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accessible

to others

To conclude

,

although

there is a concern that the

internet

has affected our privacy,security and control I think, that the advantages

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using the

Internet

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outweighs

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the

dissadvanteges

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disadvantages

.