In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today's generation, advertising had played a big role in stating their products and these days businesses
also
emphasised their product in a new ways
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
new ways
a new way
To begin
with, advertising has very common for launching a new product or if it new
they have researched and have created more advancement in it which is ready to sell. Add a missing verb
is new
For example
, whenever apple release
a new version of there, it creates its advertisement in Change the verb form
releases
such
a way that people get more attracted towards their new phones
. unknowingly, it's the same phone with some new features that have got updated in it. Moreover
, they try to grab the attention of younger folks by keeping exchange offers with their old phones
, 0 cost EMI,etc. This
keeps their business growing
of a company by with new marketing techniques.
Replace the word
growth
Furthermore
, companies like MI,
and IQ Remove the comma
apply
phones
sell their phones
online platforms like amazon and Flipkart. This
is because, whenever, they launch a new phone, they sell them at limited stocks by keeping them online and giving only
1 hour. it runs Correct pronoun usage
it only
of
a first come first served basis in that whoever is lucky will be able to book it online and within 30min it will be sold out. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, they repeat these kinds of offers in next
few days which eventually creates an eagerness in folks to buy the phone who didn't get the opportunity to buy and wait for their turn to come.
By ,Correct article usage
the next
this
we come to conclusion
that, since the new trend of marketing has come, companies are trying their best try and lure more people Correct article usage
the conclusion
by
the above techniques.Change preposition
with
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