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The average number of hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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We can see from the bar chart that in primary, lower secondary and upper secondary
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, the teaching
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 per year spent by each teacher in
Japan
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,
Spain
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, Iceland and
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USA
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the USA
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 in 2001 witnessed both similarities and differences.
Teachers
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 from upper secondary
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school
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schools
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 in
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USA
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the USA
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 topped the list of teaching
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 per year, with an average number of approximately 1,100
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, followed by
Spain
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 and Iceland.
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, there was no great difference between
USA
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 and
Spain
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, and in
Japan
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,
teachers
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 in upper secondary
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 worked only around 600
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.
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,
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 in primary
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 experienced a lower number of
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 with 900
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 in
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USA
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the USA
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 and around 600
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 in
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 three countries. The teaching
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 in lower secondary in
Japan
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 and
Spain
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 maintained almost the same as that in primary
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 there was a significant increase in Iceland and
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. As to each country, in
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USA
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the USA
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, teaching
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 in all three kinds maintained the longest in comparison to
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the other
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 three countries and in
Japan
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,
teachers
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 of all kinds experienced a nearly equal number of teaching
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. Spanish
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 in high
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 worked the longest teaching
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, reaching about 1,000
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 when compared with that in primary and lower secondary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual hours of teaching
  • teaching workload
  • educational systems
  • teacher-student ratio
  • significantly
  • slightly
  • noticeably
  • gap
  • highest/lowest number of hours
  • compare
  • contrast
  • reflect
  • variations
  • distribution of teaching hours
  • average
  • respectively
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