Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that clever marketing tempts plenty of customers to buy products but some

people

pay little attention to general advertising. I am going to shed some light on

this

statement. On

one

hand, in globalization

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internet influences our daily lives,

people

spend at least an hour per day on social

media

and,

thus

, get bombarded with numerous advertisements.

Therefore

, online marketing becomes extremely successful

due to

the undeniable fact that online shopping encourages us to buy things that we do not need. To exemplify, producers choose to advertise their products through the internet which is the

media

reached by millions of

people

within a few seconds. It is the best way used to communicate with their consumers.

Furthermore

, more social attention can be paid to the products when talked about by a famous person.

This

tie-in persuades those following them to make

a

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consumption.

On the other hand

, some advertisements advertised in traditional

strategy

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strategies

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that had been widely used in the past are considered unattractive.

Thus

,

people

pay little attention to it.

For example

, It’s harder for customers to see any advertisements posted on the

media

costing them a financial obstacle

such

as

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magazines

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than the

media

which is totally free to use like

internet

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the internet

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.

Moreover

,

although

advertisement

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the advertisement

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is

one

of the first priorities of making

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the decision

a decision

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decision

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decisions

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customers because it is the first step

of

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introducing what they want to sell to the public,

price

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the price

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and quality of goods and services are,

nevertheless

, still

one

of

basic

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the basic

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factors affecting purchasing.

To conclude

, despite

importance

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the importance

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of advertisement

at

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persuading

client

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clients

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,

price

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the price

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and quality of goods and services are, as well,

one

of the factors leading to

a

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complete purchase.