The graph below gives information about the number of cases of diarrhea in Mashhad between 1983 and 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
reported in Mashhad , over a 9 - year
time period from 1983 to 1992 .
In general , 1989 was the era that accounted Correct your spelling
9-year
most
amount of Change preposition
for most
Correct article usage
the diarrhea
diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
in Mashhad . Whereas
, the least reporting was on
1992 .
To be specific , in 1983 only 100 patients Change preposition
in
was
estimated to be hospitalized Correct subject-verb agreement
were
due to
diarrhea
in Mashhad , and Change the spelling
diarrhoea
this
had been stabled
until 1985 . Replace the word
stable
However
, in 1986 the figures risen
slightly and reached approximately 200 victims in 1987 . But , after one year it had experienced a moderate fallAdd the auxiliary verb
rose
have risen
on
Change preposition
in
diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
,
and accounted Remove the comma
apply
around
55 suffers .Surprisingly , in 1989 the Change preposition
for around
cases
related to diarrhea
had upsurged significantly and reached Change the spelling
diarrhoea
at
Change preposition
apply
the
peak of 400 patients , which Correct article usage
a
then
dropped to 350 victims in 1991 . Meanwhile , in the finally
year the reporting for Replace the word
final
diarrhea
Change the spelling
diarrhoea
cases
recorded a sudden collapse in diarrhea
rating , which was 0 % .Change the spelling
diarrhoea
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diarrhea, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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