Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Modern

life

can be very taxing,

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

so education is the prime need of the day. Better education

guarantee

Change the verb form

guarantees

show examples

better work provisions

ans

Correct your spelling

and

so better quality of

life

. Extra classes after

school

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

considered pertinent by some people,

while

others opine that they have negative repercussions.

This

essay

delve

Change the verb form

delves

show examples

into both views before reaching an opinion. To commence with the facet of the agreement, there

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

a myriad of things to be shared in its favour. Primarily, additional

time

at

school

,

learning

Correct word choice

and learning

show examples

,

ensures

Change the verb form

ensure

show examples

that the

kids

are imbibing education under

supervisions

Fix the agreement mistake

supervision

show examples

, rather than engaging in

after

Add a hyphen

after-school

show examples

school

illegal activities.

For instance

,

recent

Correct article usage

a recent

show examples

generation vape research study conducted in

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

New South Wales divulged that most young adults use e-cigarettes after

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

school

. Illegal behaviours

in

Change preposition

at

show examples

Correct article usage

a youbg

show examples

youbg

Correct your spelling

young

age

adversly

Correct your spelling

adversely

affects

Change the verb form

affect

show examples

the educational

abd

Correct your spelling

and

career

prospectives

Replace the word

prospects

show examples

of the children and

thus

affects

Correct subject-verb agreement

affect

show examples

their quality of

life

.

Further

, additional period

spend

Wrong verb form

spent

show examples

at

school

ensures that the

school

work is done,

further

imbibing knowledge and interest in subjects to the

kids

.

For example

, in South Korea,

kids

spend

after

Add a hyphen

after-school

show examples

school

hours

in private institutions and so is one of the highest generators

PhD

Change preposition

of PhD

show examples

scholars in the world. The additional aid in subjects

to

Change preposition

for

show examples

kids

, which is practically impossible to provide

at

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the designated

school

hours

, ensures that everyone is educated adequately. Shifting towards the second

school

of thought, attending extra classes after

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

school

has some negative repercussions. Spending more

time

at

school

reduces

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

family

time

and children need more bonding

time

with their families to warrant

parents

Change noun form

parents'

parent's

show examples

unconditional love and care for them. To exemplify, a Norwegian study analysed the possible reasons for the reduced crime rate in Norway and increased family bonding was stated as one of the reasons.

Thus

, the

congent

Correct your spelling

content

statement has been vindicated as well.

Moreover

, extra learning

hours

in some cases increase the exhaustion in

kids

and reduce the

time

they spend on

extra curricular

Correct your spelling

extracurricular

show examples

activities. The contemporary world needs scholars as well

Correct word choice

as athlets

show examples

athlets

Correct your spelling

athletes

, musicians and artists. To summarise, the two sides of the

arguement

Correct your spelling

argument

concerning the prospect of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

additional class

hours

has

Correct subject-verb agreement

have

show examples

strong support.

However

, after

thorough

Add an article

a thorough

show examples

analysis of

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

both sides,

it is clear that

the idea of spending

additional

Add an article

an additional

show examples

period

Fix the agreement mistake

periods

show examples

at classes can be bolstered as there are far more advantages

that

Correct word choice

than

show examples

teh

Correct your spelling

the

disadvantages. So, in my opinion, youngsters should spend more

time

at

school

leading to higher values in

life

and profession.