You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. You have not yet met the neighbor.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings
you
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to you

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my
neighbor
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neighbour

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.A
years
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year

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ago I moved
in
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into

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removable
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a removable

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apartament
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apartment

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childs
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child

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that is
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Nick and Susan do not give me sleep
make
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and make

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very
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a very

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loud
noise
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noises

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in the evenings.
For example
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yestarday
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yesterday

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kicked
ball
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the ball
a ball

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into my wall and smashed my window.
Secondly
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,they painted
outer
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the outer

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part house and my new car.
Thirdly
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at
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apply

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my
childs
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child's

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beat
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beating

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run
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running

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.Your children are rude
creaturesIf
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creatures

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your children continue I catch and punish them.I will first break their arms gouge out their eyes and throw them in the trash.Of course I
not
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do not
did not

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go to
such
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lengths.If they start doing shit like
this
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again I will call the pleas.Please put your children in order. I think after these words we will not spoil our relationship and we will become the best
neighbors
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neighbours

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. Thanks for your understanding
my
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,my

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friend. Yours faithfully, Michel Jordan
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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