You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. You have not yet met the neighbor.

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings
you
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my
neighbor
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.A
years
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ago I moved
in
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removable
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a removable
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apartament
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apartment
.Your
childs
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child
that is
Nick and Susan do not give me sleep
make
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and make
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very
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loud
noise
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noises
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in the evenings.
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,they
yestarday
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yesterday
kicked
ball
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the ball
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into my wall and smashed my window.
Secondly
,they painted
outer
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part house and my new car.
Thirdly
,they abuse
at
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my
childs
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child's
beat
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and
run
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.Your children are rude
creaturesIf
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creatures
your children continue I catch and punish them.I will first break their arms gouge out their eyes and throw them in the trash.Of course I
not
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do not
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go to
such
lengths.If they start doing shit like
this
again I will call the pleas.Please put your children in order. I think after these words we will not spoil our relationship and we will become the best
neighbors
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. Thanks for your understanding
my
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friend. Yours faithfully, Michel Jordan
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