Increasingly, the pressure of work is forcing people to spend less and less time with their families. This situation is eroding the family structure, with dangerous consequences for society as a whole. In what ways is the pressure of modern day living damaging family unity and how can this problem be reduced?
Due to
the emergence of high pressure in the workforce, most Linking Words
employees
do not have plenty of Use synonyms
time
for their Use synonyms
families
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Although
there are several factors to destroy family structure, in my view, there are Linking Words
also
various methods to take steps to address Linking Words
this
issue.
On the one hand, there are a lot of causes why many Linking Words
workers
spend less Use synonyms
time
with their Use synonyms
families
. First of all, a large number of companies force the Use synonyms
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overload, Use synonyms
for instance
, some people are assigned to do a project in the evening and must present the clients tomorrow morning. Linking Words
This
leads them to Linking Words
work
overtime so as to accomplish their assignments on Use synonyms
time
without any blame from employers. By doing so, Use synonyms
workers
are usually exhausted and prefer to relax rather than communicate with their relatives. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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initially
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employees
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workers
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On the other hand
, there are many measures that businesses could take to tackle the problems. Linking Words
To begin
, firms should be aware of Linking Words
work
-life balance in order to avoid being stressed during Use synonyms
work
and have sufficient Use synonyms
time
to do any activities with their Use synonyms
families
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, governments should legislate labour law by working only 3 days per week. Linking Words
Finally
, companies provide the activities, Linking Words
such
as outings or field trips, between Linking Words
workers
and their Use synonyms
families
for enhancing their relationships to unity and reducing controversy.
In conclusion, even though Use synonyms
work
overload which leads Use synonyms
workers
to spend many hours working is a majority reason for damage to the family structure, I strongly believe that if firms support their Use synonyms
employees
to have rest Use synonyms
time
by reducing the days to Use synonyms
work
and providing any entertainment for Use synonyms
workers
’ family, Use synonyms
this
will help their relatives to oneness.Linking Words
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