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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The given line graph Elucidates the information on emissions of
carbon
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dioxide
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 individually in four different countries
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 the united kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and, Portugal from 1967 to 2007. In 1967, there was one person in Portugal for the
emission
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 of
carbon
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dioxide
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, which significantly rose to 5 people in the
emission
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 of
carbon
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dioxide
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 till 2007.
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 in Italy the fluctuation can be seen from 1967 to 2007, at the beginning there were 4 people who emitted
carbon
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dioxide
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 and later on it reached 8 people. In the case of Sweden
initially
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, it was 8
persons
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 who emitted
carbon
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dioxide
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then
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 there was a sharp increase to above 10
persons
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 who were involved in the
emission
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.
Finally
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, the United Kingdom can be seen as a reverse case where the number of
persons
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 emitting
carbon
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dioxide
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 was reduced
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 from 11 to 9
persons
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. Overview, it can be speculated that the three countries that are Sweden, Italy, and Portugal have increased
carbon
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dioxide
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 emissions from beginning to end,
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 in the case of the United kingdom
emission
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 of
carbon
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dioxide
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 was decrees per person.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is, whereas".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, emission, persons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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