new research has shown that overeating has a bigger problem than hunger, what are the reasons for this problem? how can it be solved?

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many
people
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face with
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of overeating which leads to obesity or various other deceases. In
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I shall discuss some reasons like no proper planned
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and state of
depression
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faced by these
people
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and
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see some solutions how to
control
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this
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issue. To embark upon, overeating is a phenomenon observed in
people
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of all age categories, but nowadays much prevail in teenagers, one of the prominent
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is that
people
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doesn't follow any
diet
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which leads to many deceases
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as obesity etc.
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to
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clinical
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is
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one of the major reasons why
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face
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syndrome,
people
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inorder
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to
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their
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they start eating more and more
food
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. In
additon
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addition
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this
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there are
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people
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who are addicted to eating
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and
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no
control
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over their
food
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intake.
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to solve
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phenomenon,
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it is important to root cause out the
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why
people
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face
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problem, whether it is no proper
diet
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plan
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or clinical
depression
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or anything else. After the first step, if the
reason
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is no planned
diet
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,
people
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should consult a
dietetion
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dietitian
dietician
to get
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a suggestion
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suggestion
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suggestions
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for their
dialy
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daily
diet
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plan
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and strictly follow the
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dialy
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daily
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the
reason
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is clinical
depression
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,
people
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should consult a
doctor
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and get treated for
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problem. Most
people
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who are under
depression
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refuse to see
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doctor
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a doctor
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someone from family or friends should convince the person to see
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doctor
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a doctor
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and
takem
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take
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them to see one. For those
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who
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have
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of
food
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intake must be taken care
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their friends or family. In
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we have seen various reasons
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for
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overeating
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as no controlled
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, clinical
depression
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and addiction, and discussed various
solution
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solutions
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like consulting a
dietetion
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dietitian
dietician
for
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diet
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a diet
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plan
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, taking
help
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the help
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of
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doctor
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a doctor
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in case of
depression
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