The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks.These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Overall
, It displays the intake of
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
consumed in meals and snacks. it is noted that the consumption of
sodium
is 43% in
dinner
whereas
the least is the consumption of
sugar
in
dinner
at 23%. For breakfast, it is depicted that everything is normally consumed by keeping saturated fat and
sugar
at 16 % and least
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sodium
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14 %. For ,lunch it shows that
sodium
is consumed at 29% and saturated fat at 26%
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keeping the lowest as
sugar
at 19%. At
dinner
, it is noted that
sodium
was highly consumed at 43% and saturated fat at 37% followed by the consumption of
sugar
at 23%
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dinner
.
Furthermore
, in ,snacks it was noted that
sugar
was quite high which depicts at 42% considerably having
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saturated fat at 21% and
sodium
at 14%.
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