In many countries, there are a lot of students who commit suicide each year. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

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these days. people believe that nowadays

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young people are under too much pressure from many aspects, especially

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when they have to study too much. in my opinion, The increase in the number of

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committing

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many reasons. Now,

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will discuss some common causes and solutions to

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problem. One thing

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of great significance is that many teenagers

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. There are many

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for

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have too much pressure from studying. For one thing,

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always want their

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to get good marks. For another, they have to study so hard to the point where they don't have enough

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time to rest, just to please their

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rise to a number of

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that

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with making

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and they usually encounter case racial discrimination. The most familiar example of

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is in Viet Nam,

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are very strict and tend to want their

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to get the best grades, especially in exams.

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, their teachers give them a lot of homework.

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, negative influence from social networks,

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situation. It seems quite clear that

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face

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pressure leading to depressing thoughts,

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at life in a pessimistic

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, so they find a

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to escape by committing

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well known that

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should pay more attention to their

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, teach them in a more appropriate

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, and should not put lots of emphasis on academic achievement. Government is

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responsible for

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about the education of all ages. The immediate result it produces is

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should not be exposed to social networks too much and too early. Perhaps the obvious result is both teachers and

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should give them time to rest and relax after a stressful school day. A better example of

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in Japan, teaching in Japan

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does not impose the

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' thinking. In the same

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the school

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should respect the results of the

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, so they never publish the score

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, so that all of the

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have the opportunity to study in an equal environment. It

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no difference that families, schools and governments have to listen to your

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if they are going through the most difficult period of student life. In summary, it is important to protect and prevent

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issue for minors, governments and families should take aggressive measures

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lots of factors

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to the high number of teen suicides each year.