Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solution can you suggest

There is some instant of criminal activity which

happen

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happens

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due to

alcohol

overconsumption. A section of society thinks that banning

alcohol

reduce the

crime

rate

,

whereas

other consider there are measures that can help. In

this

essay, I will discuss the other measure to control

crime

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the crime

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rate

along with

banning

of

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alcohol

.

To begin

with, it is considered that some rates of

crime

result from

alcohol

. People think the banning of

alcohol

will deter the

crime

rate

as

alcohol

slows down the

mind

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process. A person unable to differentiate between right and wrong commits some major

crime

.

Although

it might reduce criminal activities, it is not a feasible

solution

. Even it leads to a problem like unemployment.

For example

, recently

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South

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Korea sealed on the wine factories, which caused unemployment and economic loss to the country.

Hence

, banning

alcohol

is not a good

solution

to control the

crime

rate

. On other hand, there are some measures that can be taken by the government to control

crime

. First and foremost, creating job opportunities for new graduates, because some of them only

involve

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in

crime

when they do not have an income source.

For instance

, after graduating, many adults get pressured and frustrated, making them earn money wrong, like through hacking, robbery, and fraud.

Moreover

, the government should provide free education to those who can afford it; lack of education

also

leads to more

crime

in society.

Therefore

, these two solutions can help to protect any country from criminal

offence

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offences

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. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed why the banning of

alcohol

is not a good

solution

to reduce the number

offence

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of offence

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in the country

and

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apply

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there are other measures

such

as more job opportunities for new graduates and free education for the poor, which are the best

solution

for

this

problem.