Many would argue that scientific research requires a degree of oversight from the relevant governmental authorities. In my opinion, properly handled, this is a sensible and necessary policy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In today's world, with the advancements
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technology and information
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our fingertips scientists can make a lot of new discoveries and improvements
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drugs, treatments and so on.
However
, as these can get a lot of praise amongst other scientists it could seem horrifying to the public eye.
Therefore
, maybe there should be people in other aeries who should look at
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publishing
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I will discuss
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and disadvantages of government intervention in the scientific field of
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Firstly
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would be that government could stop upcoming backlash of discovery or the burdens of application of the
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forbidden by the government of ethics to interfere with the human genome. The reason for
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is for medicine
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very promising, because in
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way you could avoid
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possible genetic diseases before the baby is even born.
On the other hand
, the deletion of genes or replacement of them could create other problems that are unknown and could be even deadly to a child and even if the child lives the undefined burdens could only be seen in the future or seen only
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the upcoming generation.
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, it is important to have people
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look
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into the
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and see what the over can’t.
However
, the
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oversight
from the relevant governmental authorities could be a disadvantage too.
For instance
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it’s forbidden to gain or work with
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of
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child or
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placenta.
Nevertheless
, working with these
cells
is possible in other European countries.
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kind of ban was received negatively by scientists in Lithuania. Since stem
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the beginning of all
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can differentiate
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a neuron, bone cell or any other cell in our body. In medicine stem
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are already used for regenerating skin after severe burns
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radiation
then
the wounds can’t heal themself.
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ever started to grow parts of the body like
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from these
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Consequently
, our workers in the laboratories can’t participate in
this
research
and help our own people and the stem
cells
from the abortions are wasted when they can be used for the greater good. In conclusion,
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interference is needed in cases of
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human genome editing and avoiding the problems that
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from it, but it can
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of stem
cells
where
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regeneration can save from losing a limb.
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