The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents
finance
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data of
a
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certain Britain's Police Officers in two years; 2017 and 2018
while
the pie charts give information about
further
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distribution of the budget.
Overall
, the table depicts that most of the
money
came from
National
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the National
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Government and the distribution of its
money
went to officers' salaries based on the pie charts. First of all,
National
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the National
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government expended 175.5 €m in 2017 and added about 2 €m in the two following
next
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years. 91.2 €m
gave
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by Local taxes in the first year and the
amout
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amount
of
money
given increased by 11 €m in the second year. Other sources
such
as grants did not contribute too much by giving only half of million euros within the period. The total
of
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money
allocated to the police was 304.7 €m in 2017 and 318.6 €m in the latter year.
Secondy
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Second
, the
money
given by
Government
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, Locals, and Other sources were distributed a third to the officers and staff in 2017 and 69% in 2018. The same amount percentages, which was 17% were allocated to technology within the same years. For buildings and
transport
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transport,
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expenses were given 8% and 14% during the period of time.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, €m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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