The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents
finance
data of Replace the word
financial
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certain Britain's Police Officers in two years; 2017 and 2018 Correct article usage
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while
the pie charts give information about further
distribution of the budget. Add an article
the further
Overall
, the table depicts that most of the money
came from National
Government and the distribution of its Correct article usage
the National
money
went to officers' salaries based on the pie charts.
First of all, National
government expended 175.5 €m in 2017 and added about 2 €m in the two following Correct article usage
the National
next
years. 91.2 €m Correct word choice
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gave
by Local taxes in the first year and the Wrong verb form
given
amout
of Correct your spelling
amount
money
given increased by 11 €m in the second year. Other sources such
as grants did not contribute too much by giving only half of million euros within the period. The total of
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money
allocated to the police was 304.7 €m in 2017 and 318.6 €m in the latter year.
Secondy
, the Correct your spelling
Second
money
given by Government
, Locals, and Other sources were distributed a third to the officers and staff in 2017 and 69% in 2018. The same amount percentages, which was 17% were allocated to technology within the same years. For buildings and Correct article usage
the Government
transport
expenses were given 8% and 14% during the period of time.Add a comma
transport,
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