In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the
last
century, almost every family were running in same
mode---- the man went out to Change the article
the same
work
for money
and the women
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woman
.
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did.
standed
at home to take care Correct your spelling
stand
their
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of their
children
. Now a days
, it is abnormal. The role division has Correct the word
Nowadays
ecome
more and more unclear . The family Correct your spelling
become
Stracture
has changed. I think Correct your spelling
structure
this
changing are bring
many positives to our Change the verb form
are brought
are bringing
sociaty
and Correct your spelling
society
make
our life better. There are three reasons to prove that
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makes
Firstly
, the family structure
changing can make the living ability better. The cost et living has rose
.fastly since Change the verb form
risen
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the least
least
century started. Not only the price of housingCorrect your spelling
last
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
the food and
health care. The income earned by one
man was hard to hear a hold family, so the tamily
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family
need
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needed
one
more person to work
.
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, the women started to enter the working place and become Replace the word
Then
one
of the
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apply
breadwinner
.After people found that it can bring more perfect for Change to a plural noun
breadwinners
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the family
a family
it
they let Correct pronoun usage
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the woman
a woman
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women
work
like their husbands they stared
to encourage Correct your spelling
started
woman
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women
earn
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to earn
money
more income means they can have a better life they can save the extra money
for their future to buy a big house or car The family roles changed cause
the finance it Add the particle
to cause
improve
the loving abilityChange the verb form
improves
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, therefore,
therefore
family structure
changing is a good thing
Secondly
family changing can give Add a comma
,Secondly
children
a better growth they ways of earning money
are growing flourish,training or works which need strength are not the only choice there are more works which need strength are not the only chice
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choice
are
more Change the verb form
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work
which need
knowledge A family did not need to have more than three Change the verb form
needs
children
to be the farming helper and the children
are boys or girls are also
not important in order to allow their children
to have a better education and resources parents
tend to only have one
to two children
in this
way they can get mine support the burden ok parents
is also
reduced fewer kids more success and less hard having fewer children
is good for both parents
and children
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changes in family Add a comma
,Lastly
structure
can encourage gender
equality some people may said
that changes in family Change the verb form
say
structure
will cause discord between the previous generation and the present generation and affect family harmony this
does not help gender
equality within the family but I think it is not hold
water
The Change the verb form
is not holding
structure
change from extended family into nuclear
family the number of family members has been reduced from generally more than five to a maximum of five the Add an article
the nuclear
a nuclear
whloe
family consists of Correct your spelling
whole
parents
and children
both parents
are important encomic
pillars of the family so they must cooperate well. father is no longer the host of all affairs when there are only two or Correct your spelling
economic
one
children
in the family parents
take care of them regardless of gender
some of the male and female strereotyoes
Of the older generation is wrong removing them helps men and Correct your spelling
stereotypes
woman
become more equal
The conclude Fix the agreement mistake
women
gender
role diversity and the emphasis on the tamale and children
stand are benetit
for Correct your spelling
benefit
benefits
affsprjng
and Correct your spelling
offspring
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society's
sociaty's
development Correct your spelling
society's
although
the changes in the family structure
will bring some friction but
from the Remove the conjunction
apply
results
it seems that three are more advantages than disadvantagesAdd a comma
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