IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#people #usa #food #restaurants #summarise #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given graph indicates the frequency of consumption at fast
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
Use synonyms
 among
people
Use synonyms
 in the USA during the period from 2003 to 2013. Information is shown for six different categories; Every day, Several times a
week
Use synonyms
, Once a
week
Use synonyms
, Once or twice a
month
Use synonyms
, A few times a year, and Never. Looking at the
overall
Linking Words
 perspective, it is readily apparent that the different percentages were seen among all the listed figures.
In addition
Linking Words
, for a decade between 2003 and 2013, the proportion of
people
Use synonyms
 eating fast
food
Use synonyms
 in
restaurants
Use synonyms
 once a
week
Use synonyms
 and once or twice a
month
Use synonyms
 showed larger figures than others, especially in 2013, over 30% of
people
Use synonyms
 in the USA consume in fast
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
Use synonyms
 once or twice a
month
Use synonyms
. When it comes to Americans who eat at fast
food
Use synonyms
restaurants
Use synonyms
 once a
week
Use synonyms
, they account for the biggest rate between 2003 and 2006, and in 2013, the ratio of
people
Use synonyms
 eating at
restaurants
Use synonyms
 once or twice a
month
Use synonyms
 showed a similar figure
with
Change preposition
to
show examples
 the figure standing over 30%. Meanwhile, during the given period, the least percentage of
people
Use synonyms
 consumed fast
food
Use synonyms
 in
restaurants
Use synonyms
 every day, and the figure of
people
Use synonyms
 who never experienced fast
food
Use synonyms
 at
restaurants
Use synonyms
 was the almost same as the ratio of Americans eating instant
food
Use synonyms
 every day slightly under 5%.
Submitted by doseun on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants, people, week, month with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
▼
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
What to do next:
Look at other essays: