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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am
Neriessa
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Nerissa
 De Peralta, currently residing at Bauhinia Tower, Tivoli Gardens Residences. I am writing
this
 letter to express my frustration regarding the disturbing noise
that is
 coming from the ongoing drainage construction by the river. I have been on the night shift as a customer service representative for the past few days.
Due to
 my work, I must stay up all night and sleep during the day. Because of the disturbance of your heavy equipment, I can’t get a well-rested sleep, and now my body is restless. Apart from that, when I do my errands, I’ve noticed how it causes too much traffic outside our vicinity, only to find out that there is just one side of the road that we can only pass on, making it more congested than it was before. I highly suggest you hire more construction workers to speed up the operation so that it will not cause any more complaints in the future. I am hoping for a quick resolution to
this
 matter. Yours sincerely,
Neriessa
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Nerissa
 De Peralta
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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