The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams below illustrate the steps involved in manufacturing frozen
fish
pies.
The first diagram shows how potatoes
are processed.Potatoes
are usually stored for almost 1 month before they are ready to be processed. The manufacturing process begins with cleaning and peeling potatoes
, after which,they are sliced and boiled before they are cooled down ,and moved to store containers.
The second diagram provides information about the process of preparation of fish
. First , the fish
is seasoned with salt and lemon juice, then
it is put in the oven to be cooked ,once cooked , the skin and bones are removed and inspected. Next,
the fish
is mixed with cooked peas and sauce. The final stage is mixing fish
with potatoes
where fish
pies are boxed ,
and put in freezers ready to be Remove the comma
apply
dispached
to different stores.Correct your spelling
dispatched
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