The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below illustrate the steps involved in manufacturing frozen

fish

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pies. The first diagram shows how

potatoes

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are processed.

Potatoes

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are usually stored for almost 1 month before they are ready to be processed. The manufacturing process begins with cleaning and peeling

potatoes

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, after which,they are sliced and boiled before they are cooled down ,and moved to store containers. The second diagram provides information about the process of preparation of

fish

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. First , the

fish

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is seasoned with salt and lemon juice,

then

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it is put in the oven to be cooked ,once cooked , the skin and bones are removed and inspected.

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the

fish

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is mixed with cooked peas and sauce. The final stage is mixing

fish

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with

potatoes

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where

fish

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pies are boxed

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and put in freezers ready to be

dispached

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dispatched

to different stores.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, potatoes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

137 words

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the images below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain. summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

People in big cities are facing many health challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What causes air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

Overall, men are more satisfied with local conditions than women.

Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

Some people think that the goverment should be responsible for crime prevention. Others believe that it is the responsibilty of the individual to protect themselves. Disucss both views and give their opinion.